Science fiction

Argibel The Orc : The Bitter Romantic Chapter 3

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The elf female ate the porridge she was given with relish. Argibel noticed this and wondered whether perhaps Gruby had not been feeding her enough...
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The Speech Writer Pt. 5

Mara was Pearl's best friend. That was how it had been since basically forever. They met in grade two because of Manyo. He was being mean to Pearl...

How can I have more feeling in this scene without making this more cringy?

It's supposed to be KIND OF emotional, for it's one that marks the start of a change in one of my characters. (Keep expectations low lol) I provide a little bit of context, and then the scene itself. How can I accomplish the goal in the title, or make it better in other ways?

Argibel The Orc : The Bitter Romantic Chapter 2

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Mannioch, the King of the Orcs in the mountains at that time, was trying to force the Elves to stay in their fortresses at that time. He did not want...

1:3:7 Inspection (Part 3)

“I’m not liking this one bit.” Magpie couldn’t stop looking over his shoulders. “They’re all staring at us.” “They’re probably getting used to the...

1:3:7 Inspection (Part 2)

The overground section of the facility was nearly three kilometres long and two wide; surrounded entirely by a thick wire mesh. There were bright...

1:3:7 Inspection (Part 1)

Enamoured. Destiny watched as Curve practiced, both of them partially intentionally, partially unintentionally ignoring the beeping of the ships...

The Speech Writer Pt. 4

Pearl stared blankly at the dark screen before her. In red text demanding for attention at the very top of the screen was the word ERROR! blinking in...
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