The Last Train


By luigi_pagano
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It was a suburban station
in the middle of nowhere.
The last train had just left,
no reason to remain there.
The station manager smiled
and was obviosly delighted
that he could now go home
as all travellers had alighted.
The passengers had gone,
most of them except me.
I'd stopped at the “Gents”
because I needed a pee.
With ablutions over, I tried
to exit the train station, but
I couldn't leave the premises:
the doors were tightly shut.
Trapped in the waiting room
the only things I was able
to read, were a notice board
and the railways timetable.
What one of the notes stated
was something I did't expect:
the station was permanently
closed, with immediate effect.
I recalled the quote “Abandon
all hope, ye who enter here”
and I was suddenly assailed
by an uncontrollabble fear.
Would the building be flattened
by a big mechanical bulldozer?
The question that I may be in it
was an utterly petrifying poser.
© Luigi Pagano 2025
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Yikes! Luigi, what a scary
Yikes! Luigi, what a scary scenario, I'd definitely be panicking if that happened to me.
Hope you are well.
Jenny. xx
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! Well, hope 'he/you' found a
! Well, hope 'he/you' found a phone number and had a mobile! Reminded me of on holiday finding the multistorey carpark locked when we came our of church. The notice had not been prominent I think. But we found a phone number and the chap was very reconciled to often coming out! Rhiannon
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In the old days
In the old days they had coin operated toilets Luigi, they say that is how the "jive" was invented, by a bad penny. The only jive I know is your "Madiba Jive!"
Have a good day! Tom
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You need the old 'remove shoe
You need the old 'remove shoe and put it through the window' strategy in this scenario Luigi. I had an elderly friend who put it to use many times when she either forgot her key or couldn't make it work - quite an expensive hobby!
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Reminds me of the J G Ballard
Reminds me of the J G Ballard story Concrete Island. What a scary thought.
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