Bad writing prize IP

Cherry

By alex_tomlin

Sat, 30 Jul 2011
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“Put that slice of beautifully decorated home-made coffee and walnut cake with chocolate icing and a cherry on top down now,” our hero, the defrocked priest, screamed dramatically in the pitch of C as he burst into the room like a bat out of heaven, proclaiming triumphantly, “I can now reveal the identity of the Primrose Hill Poisoner!”

Certificate U
Story
Drama

Comments

Submitted by Highhat on
Dramatically awful

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
cake, religion, upmarket location, murder mystery - this piece has it all!

 

Submitted by alex_tomlin on
Thanks! And thanks for the cherry. Can't help reflecting on the irony of writing a sentence of rubbish and getting a cherry while my 3,000 word epic that I slaved over gets overlooked! Ah well, this the way of the world as my old gran used to say.

Submitted by oldpesky on
This is very funny alex. Don't worry about the cherry irony, it's a strange old world

Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
this is brilliant, a little delight!

 

Submitted by alex_tomlin on
Thanks very much. I have to now retract my bitterness about cherries as I did get one after all. So that'll teach me to keep my mouth shut... hopefully.

Submitted by Cavalcader on
alex_tomlin Yes, well deserved cherry! Very compact and detailed. Thanks julie Hope all is well.

Submitted by lavadis on
Alex, you have placed the beating heart of creativity into our hands - please give us more