nightshift
By celticman
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I flop out of bed steamrolled like a cartoon, two-dimensional with tiredness and stand watching her. The front door is locked, but the handle is a Gordian knot that confuses her more than the turning of a key or the passing of time.
It was like sleeping with a trampoline. Arms and legs poking into my face and no way of knowing which way was up. Certainly not for Alice. She flung a leg out of bed and was off running. Her oversized drawers were like Superman’s with her nightdress tucked inside -- I don’t like to call them nappies-- and her breasts flapping under worn pale-coloured winceyette as the hall door made her more pedestrian. She carried with her an acrid and dispiriting stench that seeped into the walls and carpets and drained our life.
‘Alice,’ I coo. ‘Let’s run you a bath.’ Even though it’s 2.12 a.m. my tone is light and reassuring. I’m no longer sure she hears or understands me. Colour has drained from the pale-blue irises. Her eyes flicker past me, planning an escape route, but our house is a cage full of easy-to-wipe surfaces. Stalactites of drool hang from the corner of her chin and she scuttles lopsided, an ataxic spider missing a few legs. This strange creature, the sight of whom once opened a postbox in my stomach and my heart fell into it, is all that is left of me
I catch her in my arms as she tries to slam past me in the hall. I’m no longer as strong as I was. She wails --our downstairs neighbours the Currids no longer talk to us -- and jerks to be away somewhere else. I draw her in close and rub the top of her arms and bent back until she settles. Then I lead her to the bathroom, stepping over an oversized discarded bra lying on top of a bath towel on the tile floor.
The bath is still half-full from earlier, water cold, but the smell of bath salts and rose water lingering. I backheel shut the door behind us and snib it. My brain is full of locks, thinking ahead of where we’ll be. I ease her onto the toilet pan. She looks up at me with her angry face. I rub behind her ear. She likes that and lets me take her pants off. The first time she let me take her pants off we’d both been sixteen lying in her mum’s back bedroom when we should have been at Mass with the rest of her family. She wore the silver band of an engagement ring that made it alright. Her legs were shaking. I jiggled her breasts with my hand, wanted to dive in and cover them with my mouth and tongue, but I tripped stepping out of my pants. She stood up, hands covering her breasts, pulling her knickers from the chair next to the bed. ‘We’ll have to wait Charlie,’ she said, looking up at the crucifix about our head hanging on the wall, her face aflame with shame, saw it as some kind of sign. The smell makes me gag. I am not in control of my face. I fling the towel on the floor into the bath, corner her beside the sink and toilet and clean her off as best I can. She shrieks and swears, slapping my shoulders and head. The hair on her vulva has retreated, like her mind, to girlhood and a time before speech.
I stand aside and let her run. Every cranny has not been disinfected but she is naked and clean and fit to be seen, but nobody wants to see the broken and the old. I pull the plug in the bath. Leave the towel soaking.
She’s at the door again, struggling with the key. I think of opening it and letting her fly. Misfortune doesn’t play by the rules and say you’ve had enough. I’m all out of self-sacrifice. I stand waiting for the thought to pass like a slow-moving freight train at a crossing.
I go into our bedroom and pull the flowery quilted nightgown she likes off the hanger in the cupboard.
Standing in the hall I hold it out like an offering. ‘Alice, you’d look pretty fabulous with this on.’
She angles her head, my voice is teary. Our eyes meet. For a second she seems to recognise me.
‘Come to bed it’s cold out here.’
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.... "two dimensional with
.... "two dimensional with tiredness" is very well put. What also elevates this piece is the way in which his memories of the past mix with the present. Not an easy read, but that's not the point. Well done.
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Hi CM
Hi CM
Gosh, what a story. You bring out every emotion in it. Such powerful writing.
Jean
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This is so moving. An
This is so moving. An unstinting gaze at the reality of care, commitment and love.
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This hurts so. Language
This hurts so. Language utterly polished and unique, captures such unspeakable things, deep vulnerabilities and heart pain that can never be shared, it's all there and expressed so eloquently. I don't mind admitting that this made me sob most unexpectedly, but it was a real Gazza letting go session. I won't hold a grudge.
'the sight of whom once opened a postbox in my stomach and my heart fell into it'
Too much for me. Off for a cuppa. Really impressed with this.
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Such a moving story, that
Such a moving story, that touches the heart strings.
I loved the originality of your words, they're what makes a good writer. Couldn't pick out a favourite line, as you manage to express so many metaphors. Loved it as a whole.
Jenny.
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I remember my wife going
I remember my wife going through this with her grandmother, not quite the same thing as a lifetime mate, but it made me teary at the thought. We're all so damned fragile really. Glad I read it.
Rich
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I remember my wife going
I remember my wife going through this with her grandmother, not quite the same thing as a lifetime mate, but it made me teary at the thought. We're all so damned fragile really. Glad I read it.
Rich
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Oh Fuck....so many emotions
Oh Fuck....so many emotions you've dragged up. No more to be said. Brilliant.
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Very beautiful and moving.
Very beautiful and moving. The words went a bit blurry at the end.
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They made me go teary eyed.
They made me go teary eyed. You're a brilliant writer, you know?
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Wow. This is incredible..
Wow. This is incredible...powerful. Some writing. Second the comment pointing out the originality of the writing. These individual touches are everything and this story is so wonderfully written in that way. &that is before touch on the the subject matter, interweaving past/present. Aspire to this. Incredible
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