Unplugged (ii)

By lenchenelf

Wed, 30 Mar 2011

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11 comments

Ada appeared from behind the bay window curtain
wearing only a gummy smile and denture pots
as nipple caps.

Staff nurse almost spilled her instant noodles
over a carefully prepared discharge form.

'By 'eck, she does know how to make an entrance
when exiting the ward' said the Transport Manager.

'And my, can she crack one off, when she's had roughage'
he retched, reaching for his inhaler, 'Pureed sprouts again?'

The Day Porter nodded, 'She's after a bed on Psychie;
her lights are on, but no one at home, you see'.

minor ed. 01.12.11

Comments

hello elf. Great, I

Permalink Submitted by ScoZen on Wed, 2011-03-30 15:51

hello elf. Great, I enjoyed. "...denture pots as nipple caps..." Yes, let me know what ward she's on please.

ScoZen

You're definitely on form,

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Wed, 2011-03-30 15:52

You're definitely on form, Lena;-) A rip-snorter, this...if you'll pardon the pun. Tina;-)

Thanks Scozen, pleased you

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Wed, 2011-03-30 17:58

Thanks Scozen, pleased you liked it :-) atb Lena x

Thanks Tina, appreciated :-)

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Wed, 2011-03-30 17:59

Thanks Tina, appreciated :-) atb Lena x

Funny little ditty. The

Permalink Submitted by oldpesky on Wed, 2011-03-30 18:48

Funny little ditty. The nipple caps set the tone right from the start. Great image.

Thanks OP :-) I'm sure the

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Wed, 2011-03-30 21:52

Thanks OP :-) I'm sure the porter would have a blanket and a kind word for her dignity. atb Lena x

A wonderful snapshot! Very

Permalink Submitted by jennifer on Wed, 2011-03-30 22:49

A wonderful snapshot! Very funny! J x

Thanks Jen, a teeny

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Thu, 2011-03-31 11:02

Thanks Jen, a teeny tableaux. atb Lena x

...and the world turns >

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Fri, 2011-04-01 21:20

...and the world turns > http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/health-12922449

Love these four-minuters

Permalink Submitted by fatboy74 on Fri, 2011-04-01 21:36

Love these four-minuters Lena - I thought I wrote poetry quickly but what you do in that short time is enviable. ATB Fatboy

Thanks FB, that's a very

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Sun, 2011-04-03 21:46

Thanks FB, that's a very kind comment. atb Lena xx