Innocent Crime

By NataliSovcik

Mon, 29 May 2017

4 comments

You are an angel

You are the light

I am the danger

I am the night

Take me away

You can fly

I’ll show you the way

Demons lie

We complete each other

You and I

We could commit together

An innocent crime

Permalink Submitted by celticman on Mon, 2017-05-29 23:30

nice rhyme to it. and rhyme is not a crime - yet.

Permalink Submitted by NataliSovcik on Tue, 2017-05-30 23:05

Thanks!

Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on Tue, 2017-05-30 05:25

This has a nice staccato rhythm to it - welcome to ABCTales!

Permalink Submitted by jolono on Tue, 2017-05-30 17:56

A big warm welcome to the site. Nice pace and nice rhythm.