My Dreams are Safe (IP)
By Jane Hyphen
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My dreams are safe
Insured in all the
Tinted buds of spring
I’m reassured, I hear
In every skylark’s trill
The aria of my dreams
The watercolour stains
On precious wisps
Of petal veins contain
The tincture of my dreams
And every blossom scent
Is what I always wished
On nimble breaths of wind
The scatters of my dreams
Are cast in silva glades
And glistening trees
In every spirit shade
Of what it feels to be alive
You cannot touch my dreams
They’ve sailed
Beyond the glassy mirrors
Of our time
My dreams are flames
To light my darkest days
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Your contented dreams seem to
Your contented dreams seem to be encouraged by your delight in the detail you notice in the beauties of nature. Written in a dreamy, contented way. Rhiannon
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Wonderful response to the
Wonderful response to the Inspiration Point Jane!
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What a gorgeous read!
What a gorgeous read!
Parson Thru
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Some parts of us are sacred
Some parts of us are sacred and remain safe and untouched; they can be seen by us in nature. A lovely read.
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Holarg I find this statement
Holarg I find this statement very interesting, is it ok if I try to write about it?
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Beautiful poem, you express
Beautiful poem, you express so well the seeming fragility of Spring but also how it's actually very strong, as it has overcome the darkness of Winter, just as the flames of your dreams overcome dark times. It makes me think of those ink paintings on thick cool paper with such bright rainbow colours sometimes merging into something new and tiptoe fragile, sometimes intensely themselves
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This wonderful poem is our
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Beautiful and weaving its own
Beautiful and weaving its own dreamlike spell - this is our Poem of the Week. Congratulations!
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Yum! lovely spring dreams.
Yum! lovely spring dreams.
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you cannot touch my dreams. I
you cannot touch my dreams. I hope that's true.
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