I Dreamt of Tigers

By Jane Hyphen
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I dreamt of tigers again last night.
I hid in their shadow stripes
and watched as memories
flickered with a show of faces
as they stalked me in a jungle
of old walls and places, native
underlations forgotten, unforgotten.
‘You must not turn your back’
I remembered those words and
stared back and held their fiery gaze,
deep inside the pocket of my sleep.
All my clocks stopped now
by primal fears and wounds,
planted like letters in the jungle.
I turned my back.
Can you die inside a dream?
And will you be found
inside the layers of a tiger’s bite?
I felt jaws squeezing my temporal self,
the dream punctured as I raced up
to the surface of another day.
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Tbe idea of You must not turn
Tbe idea of You must not turn your back,on those tigers in a dream, tells me that obstacles being faced in life should be tackled head on.
Can you die in your sleep? That's also an interesting question, that I've never thought of.
Dream analysis is something I've always been interested in.
Your poem was fascinating to read Jane.
Jenny.
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Dreaminess
Can you die inside a dream?
That's something I've always wondered too. I've sometimes dreamt that I was facing death in a dream and knew that if I didn't escape the danger I might not wake up, but I always have done... so far. But that experience of waking up from a dream within a dream drives me nuts. Am I typing this or am I only dreaming that I'm typing?
They're fascinating things are dreams, and often terrifying. The words of your poem resurrected some of my dreams and my thoughts about them. I enjoyed it.
Turlough
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I used to dream of tigers a
I used to dream of tigers a lot, often fighting them off with a tiny chair! Basically, I like the words of this! The rhyme and half rhyme and the pace of a tiger in there too.
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This really does have the
This really does have the sense of being in a dream, everything too sudden and total. Will try to remember to face tigers. I liked very much the stripes, of light and shadow, of forgotten and unforgotten, of waking and unwaking. "primal fears and wounds,/planted like letters in the jungle" is so strange, made me think of collages of leaves made from writing, that if read would draw you in, entrap you like venus fly traps do, so you couldn't move and would become food for the plant. Surreal and wonderful
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More fundamental,
More fundamental, I have come across an altogether different question, that is, if I had made a promise, a solemn vow unshakable and unbreakable, for ever, then if it was in a dream, does then the vow hold? Am I bound by that vow? One that I very very clearly remember.
As far as actually dying? Well, no, I am living proof, although of course, William B
What immortal hand or eye, dare frame thy fearful symmetry?
Excellent work Jane, profound! Tom
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Beautifully written, and some
Beautifully written, and some lovely phrases. I don't think we'll ever understand dreams, or what their purpose is, other than maybe to work through the stress of the real world.
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tigers are killers, man has
tigers are killers, man has little chance but in our dreams perhaps we can escape before we wake?
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"Can you die inside a dream?
"Can you die inside a dream?
And will you be found
inside the layers of a tiger’s bite?"
Supposedly you can. Best not to test the theory.
That's a miasma of thoughts and feelings captured within the lines of this poem. Powerful and phrophetic (possibly).
Fine work, Jane.
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