Woodsman And The Medicine Woman.

By skinner_jennifer
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My sweetheart lady said to me,
whispering light as a wrath's sigh;
“come my love.” She took my hand,
gazing about...cheeks pale under full
moonlight.
“Let's meander through shelter of
overhanging trees, that flutter their
overhead leaves, while venturing
under stars that haven't been named.
As we approached the old oak, she
declared: “come feel the baby inside
me.”
I waited in expectancy, feeling
nought – but then suddenly!
Movement was scarcely a ripple,
slight wave though was blissful.
We sat beneath great oak tree,
told moon and stars of our baby;
five shooting stars we saw that
night, they plunged like rays
across the sky, it was such an
aesthetic sight.
We made a wish upon the stars,
said: “earth, air, fire and water...
give to us a healthy daughter, if
cannot be done, please instead
send fit, strong son.”
Arising from the loamy ground,
from between trees there came a
rustling sound; “What's that noise?”
my love said to me.
“I don't know! For it's too dark to see,”
was my reply bleakly.
We turned and started to walk fast,
watching for anything that should
pass; each twig that snapped –
we gasped! “What was that?”
Suddenly we stood stunned, heard
from out of darkness two shots from
a gun. I felt something hit me hard in
the chest: falling backwards I cried out
for Celest.
There was no reply – my head started
spinning, figure stood over us, his
face with anger revealing. “Witch,
Warlock hated by some, die in hell
you abominable ones.”
These words I didn't understand,
just wanted Celest and I to be as
one, with baby daughter...or our son.
Protesting I uttered: “What is it about
her you detest? This is my lady, her
name's Celest, she's pregnant with
child, we had been blessed.”
That's when he turned sternly and
said to me: “she casts spells and is
crazy – think I've just saved that baby.”
I was mad beyond words at what he'd
said, she was good and kind, but now
she's dead. I tried to get up, but could
not move – shouting was all that was
conveyed, but very soon even that's
taken away.
The rain of autumn sent chill to the
air, memory lingers beneath old oak
tree. Two spirits venture under stars
not named, bodies entiwined, as they
left wood behind.
Image is pixabay free to use.
This is a rewrite of an old poem
I wrote some years ago.
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Hi jenny,
Hi jenny,
A whimsical, witchy story in a poem. I enjoyed the atmosphere you created and the old-fashioned feel of it !!!
hilary
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She casts spells
That's quite a story Jenny. It's great to think how your imagination must have been running wild and how you managed to write it all down.
I loved the lines
said to me: “she casts spells and is
crazy – think I've just saved that baby.
They made me laugh a little. I'm not sure if they were supposed to.
Turlough
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I have been learning a little
I have been learning a little about what happened to witches, how terrifying it must have been. And so many people killed! One website said women in Scotland would have been relieved when Cromwell invaded, because he stopped the witch hunts!!! White witches, healers - it seems so unbelievably unjust to punish a helper in such harsh environments, as though achieving good, being kind, was unnatural, so an abomination. Your vivid imagination and empathy shine through in this tragic poem
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A perfect poem for the full
A perfect poem for the full moon, Jenny. It was better to be cursed by a witch than to be accused of being one. Celest is a beautiful name and you describe so well the contrast between the cold, simple men with guns and the rich magical couple and their baby.
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Hauntingly beautiful,
Hauntingly beautiful, poignant, powerful. The mix of tenderness and darkness lingers like a timeless tale, especially beneath that old oak tree!
Wishing you continued inspiration with your poetry!
Jess <3
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