The power of the word

By darkenwolf

Thu, 05 Aug 2010
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The Power of the Word

Some words are better left unspoken;
Some words once said can never be taken back.
Some words cut keener than the sharpest blade.
Some words fester like a puss filled sore.
Some words have the power to make us;
Some the power to break us.
Some words are regretted;
Some are not.

Some words can start a war;
Some words can end it.
Some words can illuminate the soul;
…I love you…
Some words can cast us into darkness;
…I’m leaving…
And some words can give us the strength to face each new day:
"…God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change; the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference…"

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Submitted by Cavalcader on
New Darkenwolf I think this sums everything up,well thought up. I 'God' grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change;the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference.. 'Silence is golden.' to understand the meanings of words is a complicated thing? interpretations can be misguided. julie xx

Submitted by darkenwolf on
its amazing to me that we can mean one thing but that our words can be misinterpreted so easily. Glad you liked it and thanks for the comments :)

Submitted by jennifer on
The quote at the end needs quotation marks, to indicate that it's borrowed from someone else... J x

 

Submitted by darkenwolf on
you're absolutely right though i wasn't sure if that applied to prayers but quotation marks added thanks.

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Love the repetition in this one, darkenwolf. Especially love these lines: 'Some words can illuminate the soul; …I love you… Some words can cast us into darkness; …I’m leaving…' Magic xxx

 

Submitted by darkenwolf on
it's what the words did to me when i heard them. Thanks for the comments magic, glad you liked it. ;)

Submitted by Nolan on
Beautiful! Keep it up we need this kind of thing &&
 

Submitted by darkenwolf on
Thank you very much; i'll try! ;)

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Darkenwolf, I love this poem, because it's so true of myself. I always speak before my brain jumps into action. It's so easy to say something that gets misinterpreted and be taken the wrong way. So many times I wanted the ground to swallow me up. But once those words are said, it's to late to retract. Very inspiring. Jenny.

 

Submitted by darkenwolf on
haven't we all done that? We forget how powerful the right words can be. ;)

Submitted by shoe on
true words indeed, I like the lines, "Some words can illuminate the soul; …I love you… Some words can cast us into darkness; …I’m leaving…" I think the examples give it a bit more depth.

 

Submitted by darkenwolf on
is there anymore powerful a sentence than - ...i love you... its amazing what those three words will make us do. Thanks for the comments shoe :)

Submitted by Kahdai on
:) great another poem, I like this one so much because it means a lot to me too K xx

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by darkenwolf on
to me too thanks for the comments; i'm glad you like it ;)

Submitted by Nolan on
As an afterthought: words can be deceit, and words can be poison. Cheers. Nolan
 

Submitted by darkenwolf on
truth accepted ;)

Submitted by Cavalcader on
New darkenwolf So well put, I am just like your poem, well done! But the word I Love You, can mean a million ways? Mind me saying the power of the word is God for me. That's another or maybe only way. julie (:-