Equilibrium Of Brushstrokes

By skinner_jennifer

Mon, 09 Nov 2020
  • 1615 reads
14 comments
 

An artist paints in

visions...to some eyes

fleeting like leaves on

a breeze,

 

art work also portrays flesh

out of positive energy,

compelled by

stylish originality,

 

a creative force this

unexplored charisma,

where intense movement

so vibrant sets ingenuity,

 

encouraged by

piquant satisfaction;

enthusiasm drifting

through imagination,

 

depicting ruddiness

those blushing cheeks

posing eagerly;

discovering flirtation,

 

inclined to splash intrigue

maybe a little too much,

but mischief has meaning

when stumbling on pleasure,

 

those twinkling eyes gesture

with dimpled confident smile,

put at ease by skilled qualities;

anticipating each brushstroke a work of art.

Certificate PG
Poem
Poems
Inspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)

Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

It must be very satifsying to be able to get down what is in your mind, espcially nuances of shade or expression. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

What a lovely meandering journey this is - thank you Jenny!

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Rhiannon,

Artists have visions that needs to be painted, like you say, it must be so satisfying to achieve expression and feel proud.

Thank you for reading and your thoughts.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Appreciate your thoughts insert and thank you for taking the time to read.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

I hope you are painting again! How you write about painting makes me think your pictures must be AMAZING

 

Submitted by Nolan on

I don't know much about art but I know skill when I see it. And beauty.

Excellent work! && Nolan

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

It's always nice to hear from you Di. Sadly I'm not painting at present, there just doesn't seem to be any time now my partner's retired. I do like to spend as much time with him as possible,

The I P this week had me thinking about the anticipation of seeing the finishing product of a piece of art and the work that goes into creating it.

I'm really pleased you liked my poem and thank you so much for letting me know.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Nolan,

what a nice comment, I'm flattered by your words of encouragement.

Thank you so much.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by airyfairy on

I'm sorry to hear you're not painting at the moment.  There is something wonderful about watching a painting take shape.  My dad used to paint, and watching him bringing things to life with the brush used to fascinate me.  A lovely poem, Jenny.

Submitted by cliffordben502 on

Thanks for sharing Jennifer. I'm not a poet or an English grad so I can't comment on mechanical/technical stuff in poetry, but I liked this a lot.

Breaking down a simple action into poetry is really effective. Reminds me of some Diane Cluck lyrics; she says she writes lyrics by just "telling the truth" and it always results in beauty. look her up, I think you'd like her songs' writing.

Anyway I had a great time with this. I'm hoping to read more poetry/learn more about it so I can leave more helpful feedback for people who write it!

Ben

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi airyfairy,

so sorry for the delay in thanking you for your comment. I've been hacked in my email and was unable to get into my in box. Hopefully it's all sorted out now, but It's such a worry when it happens.

Any way glad you liked my poem and thank you for letting me know.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Ben,

I was interested to hear about your interest in my poem. I've never written professionaly, just have fun with the language of poetry and enjoy creating. 

I do appreciate your feedback which was much appreciated.

Many thanks.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by marandina on

That the second time I've seen the word "piquant" used on this site recently. A wonderful word that seems to lend itself to writing.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi again marandina,

I can never get enough of words, spending hours going through the dictionary and looking for their meanings. It's one of those books I never get bored of.

Thank you so much for letting me know you read and enjoyed.

Jenny.